It’s another fabulous Friday and I’m anxious to flash you like I do every Friday. 😉 C’mon, you know you like it.
I’ve written a flash fiction from the image below, which was chosen by one of my FFF comrades. Exactly 100 words, no more, no less.
Flash Fiction Friday #5 ~ On the Job
Kneeled on the floor, she looked up at him. “Oh yes, please.”
Glancing around, he lowered before her and handed her the flute of sparkling sweetness. “Where are your bridesmaids?”
“Not here.” Smiling impishly, she took a sip. “Care to make the best of this time alone, gorgeous?”
He chuckled. “I wish I could, but sadly…” He pressed a pistol to her bosom and whispered, “I’m on the job.”
Standing, he gazed down at the fallen bride and sighed. Why the client wanted such a beautiful woman dead was a mystery. Oh well, on to the next target.
Copyright © Yvonne Nicolas 2011
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48 Replies to “Flash Fiction Friday #5 ~ On the Job”
Oh Wow! What a great FFF! Very impressed with your take on this picture
*grin* Thanks Naomi!
OK, so your brides had it way worse than mine WOW Yvonne. LOL
Great FFF post!
Oh yeah, I’d say being on an assassin’s list is pretty bad. But at least she looked good. *grin* Thanks Erika!
Thanks Beth! 🙂
OMG, I can’t believe she’s dead. That hurt. Great FFF!
LOL! She’s been a very bad girl, so bad, someone wanted her dead.
Oh dear! Poor bride! great interpretation!
Thanks Gemma! 😀
This was great! I never saw this coming…..ah, neither did she. Guess SHE was the cheating prick in this one and had to be punished. Loved it:) xo
😉 You know I have to catch you off guard sometimes. Thanks Muffy! 😀
Yep, sometimes a man is just got to do what a man’s got to do. Damn, I thought for a long lingering moment there, he was going to give her a chance to change his mind – in a carnal sort of way. Now that would have been hot, the bride-to-be getting some nookie on the side on her wedding day, but the pop between her boobs was an even bigger surprise. No doubt for her too. Very slick Ms. Yvonne, I love your creativity.
LOL! Don’t worry Benji, I’ll feed your carnal desires in another one. I have to give into the wickedness my muse whispers in my ear every now and then. This keeps her happy. Sometimes she likes it sexy and sometimes she likes to kill. I’m simply her word slave. 😉
What a completely unexpected twist. Although, she didn’t seem like the most upstanding person given she was wanting ‘make the most of it’ with someone who wasn’t her husband to be. Wonder who wanted her dead. Hm.
Oh yeah Sherri, she was definitely a bad girl, and she paid for it with her life. Glad you enjoyed it. 😀
Oh my God, that was brutal… Great post!
It wasn’t me, it was my muse! *snicker* Thanks Lee. 🙂
OH wow!! Such a surpising ending. I surely thought he’d fluff up that skirt and crawl underneath. But nope. LOL Great FFF!
LOL! If he wasn’t on the job, he surely would’ve crawled under her dress and had his way with her. Thanks Lani!
OMG!!!! I never saw that one coming. I thought they were going to have sex. Great post Yvonne!
*grin* I love to give you the unexpected. Thank you so much Bonni. 🙂
Ooooohhhh…..I loved this. I love a villain, hell I even love a hero, who kills without remorse.
Thank you Katie! Aren’t hot villains just delicious? 😉 Glad you enjoyed it.
LMBO! I am so sorry but I never saw that one coming. Dang the bride is dead *smh*. Great job as always, Yvonne!
I must be twisted because I am still laughing :)))
Thanks Se! *giggle* I’m glad you didn’t see it coming. I like to give you the unexpected every now and then. And I love the fact that you’re still laughing. That means you’re just as twisted as I am. 😉 Hugs.
:-). Lady that was one of those da he** moments before I started LMBO.
great Flash – not so great if you’re the bride.
*grin* Thanks Daryl!
That was terrific Yvonne. I loved the killer. Smooth talking stranger. At least he let her have a little bubbly before knocking her off. Great twist.
LOL! Hey Pat, I couldn’t let her go out without a little buzz. *grin* I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.
Fan-freaking-tastic!! Love it 🙂
*giggle* Thank you Venus!
Hot Damn. Remind me not to tick you off…if that is what you saw in this picture. Wow. What an awesome imagination.
Oh, you like my imagination, do ya? *wiggles eyebrows* Well my imagination like you too, Sherry. 😉
*eyes bug out* I had to reread this twice to make sure I wasn’t completely losing it! This was an unexpected treat! Horrible yet terrific! Thanks Yvonne! 😀
Ooo, I made you do a double take? Sweet! I’m so glad you liked it. 🙂
Aw damn, Yvonne – just – dead! You have a wicked and vindictive muse. Keep her happy PLEASE! LOL Sheesh! An intense and unexpected scene.
😀 Oh Luna, I do everything I can to keep her happy. She’s a little wicked thing, isn’t she? Thanks for commenting, ma.
Can’t help but find such a cool, calculating, cold-blooded man sexy 🙂
Deadly but sexy. *grin* Thanks Cyril.
wow, very unexpected twist at the end. oh, the life of a Cleaner. Nice FFF
Thanks Davee! Being a professional cleaner…what a life to have. Stay alert because he show up again. *grin*
Poor girl and on her wedding day. Great twist.
Thank you for commenting Lindsey. Happy you found the twist entertaining. 🙂
Holly! Cow!! I didn’t see that coming. And such a great dress too! 🙂
*giggle* At she she looked good when she got popped. 😉 Thanks for commenting.