Happy Friday readers and fellow bloggers!
I’m ready to flash you again.
I’ve written a flash fiction from the image below, which was chosen by one of my FFF comrades. Exactly 100 words, no more, no less.
(This image was chosen by Jade Baiser)
Flash Fiction Friday #6 ~ His Eyes On Me
Finally, I had his attention!
Keeping my eyes straight ahead, pretending not to notice him, I pulled my shirt off and threw it in the washer machine. His eyes on me made so damn horny I could hardly contain myself.
Anticipation in every step, I sauntered over to him. “Hey Scott, what’s up?”
“Couldn’t you just ride that juicy ass for days?”
I followed the direction of his unblinking stare. Our roommate, Tanesha was bent over, with her half covered booty in the air, loading clothes into the dryer.
Mortified, I stalked passed him and muttered, “Whatever, dude.”
Copyright © Yvonne Nicolas 2011
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40 Replies to “Flash Fiction Friday #6 ~ His Eyes On Me”
Oh sexy post. I’d like to learn more about these characters. Will you be extending this story?
I usually like to switch it up, give you different characters every time. But who knows? I may expand on it. Thanks Naomi!
Great post lots of fun! loved it!
Thanks Gemma! 🙂
OH, I wasn’t expecting that…lol… great take on this one!
Bahahaha… catch you off guard, did I? 😉
Oh, awkward moment. Good job Yvonne, I enjoyed this. 😉
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks Eden.
That was funny. I enjoyed it very much. Great post.
*grin* I love to make you smile Bonni. Thanks.
oh bummer! poor guy, I feel sorry for him 😦
Hope he’ll find someone who will really care for him!
I know right. Sometimes it’s like that. You desire him, but he doesn’t long after you in return. That’s a sign to move on. 🙂 Thanks Jade!
Awww… how embarrassing! Poor guy… but- yeah he needs to find someone who cares about him
Yes he does. Maybe he’ll find someone in a later flash fiction. 😉
Ouch, unrequited lust! Someone will soothe his ego right? I hope! Nice, Yvonne. You have such tricks up your sleeve. I look forward to your surprises! 😉
You know me Luna, I like to make you go WOW. LOL! Thank you for commenting.
LOl WOW! Great FFF! I so hoped the guy had his attention, but well, sometimes we can’t get what we really want. Poor dude.
And sometimes, it’s just better to move on. *grin* Thanks Lani!
Hmm, so is Scott really that dense or is he just fucking with Ryan? Perhaps next time Ryan should be the one bent over with his ass in the air. A nice twist Ms. Yvonne, and I can just picture your as- I mean Tanesha’s juicy booty. ((( Muwah )))
LOL! Yeah, if he bent over that would definitely get Scott’s attention. As you can tell, he’s an ass man. *snicker* Thanks for commenting Benji.
ARGH, so unfair to him. Oh lord, the angst.
*sad smile* Yeah, it is unfair, but I’m sure he’ll find somebody who’ll like him back. 🙂
Well that was unexpected but thats what makes it great! Nicely done!
*grin* It’s my job to give you the unexpected. Glad you enjoyed it.
Okay, that was took me by surprise…lol. Great lead in, and great put down, but I still think Ryan doesn’t need to give up quite yet…lol.
Yes! I love taking you by surprise! 😀 Thanks for commenting Sancre.
LOVED IT!!! Poor guy. I was not expecting that. BTW, you are totally corrupting me, Lady! You Rule!!!!
LOL! You know I love corrupting you ma. 😉 Thanks Se. It makes my day when you come by my spot.
eeeeek…dissed and dismissed….lol
*snicker* Thanks Havan!
aww i feel bad for him. great post. 🙂
Thank you Rose! 😀
Ouch I felt that from here. Poor guy, shot down before he even gets a chance. Nice twist, I liked it.
Thanks Sherry. I found that enjoy writing the FFFs more when I add a twist to it. 😀
Loved it Yvonne. Poor dude. But at least he tried, and now he knows? lol
Hey, if you don’t give it a try, you’ll never know. 🙂 Thanks for the comment Erika.
Poor Dude — Feel for him. Great post!
I know, you can’t help but feel for him. It sucks to desire someone who doesn’t desire you in return. Thanks for stopping by.
Oh my goodness, I know exactly how he feels. Fantastic job!
Thanks Venus! I think we’ve all been there some time in our life.